Angel of Death

Hey KJ! Whoa! You're on the roll with this story. Hopefully my review will be of some help. A burly man I somehow hadn’t noticed before stood when that horn ...

Hey Han-chan! we never clung so tight as that night, I think you should get rid of the 'as' because it doesn't make sense but then the rhythm is completely ...

Hey KJ! I really should be sleep but I really want to know what happens, so I apologize if this critique is bad. For a moment all I was capable ...

Hey KJ! Darn, I was hopin' I was gonna be the first one again but I'm so happy you posted another chapter of this so soon! Seriously, I wish I ...

Hey Connie! It's been a while since I reviewed anything of yours but hopefully this will be a helpful critique. ^_^ Tessa shook as Gina held the gun. Her hands ...

Hey KJ! Mom because of Dad, Mattie because of what I’d said, done to him… Try: Mom because of Dad, Mattie because of what I'd said to him..." Well, I ...

Hey KJ! It's good to see another chapter of this. I’d wrapped my arms around Phil’s neck and was moving against him in a way that a year ago I ...

Hello Merry! You don't know how happy I was when I saw this! I wish that I had made some tea. I always review better when I have something hot ...

Hey Jare-bear! I liked this a lot. It was written well, there wasn't really anything for me to nit-pick but it was certainly jumbled. Jumbled in a good way, I ...

Hey KJ! Fear is coming. I can taste his presence, drawing nearer with each second. Great hook! On that dark day I’d only turned to Fear—he’d staggered back when my ...

Hey KJ! I couldn't resist! I love the title, by the way! Sorry, I can't be of much grammatical help but I will tell you that I liked this. It's ...

Yeesh! I've been off the site for six days. Good thing I decided to get on today! Anyways, Hey Ash! Not now , after Jasmine’s mysterious arrival and Ben returning. ...

Eeeek! Ash, this is like the cherry on top of a very good sundae. I've been having a good day so far and to come home to another chapter of ...

Isaac! Isaac! Isaac! *squeals* Sorry, I just had a major fangirl moment but, Hey Ash! I met Carmen’s eyes, which were wide, startled as he was by my dramatized entrance ...

Hey KJ! Thanks for the heads up! Yeah, it does feel like old times. Really, it's good to see you're on more often. And no prob. I enjoy reading your ...